Book covers are so important, and while the popular adage is true, “You can’t judge a book by its cover,” I do. I may not judge the actual story, but if the cover doesn’t attract me in the first place, the story rarely gets read. So I need advice.
The artist sent two proofs for my upcoming paranormal. I like one while some of my friends favor the other. I’ve asked for some slight changes in one, so the artist will work on the changes and send the new proof to me, probably in a couple of days or perhaps next week. In the meantime, I’d like to know if I’m even close to what the majority likes.
Which one would attract you to the book?
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I like the bottom cover art. The lettering is better and it pops and I like the fact that the front of the house is visible.
For some reason, Vickie, my reply got lost, so I’ll try again. I’m so happy to hear someone else likes the lettering on the second one. Thanks!
I like the lettering on the top proof with the smaller house and more muted coloring of the bottom proof, although I do like your name done in the red outlined with white too.
Ah, someone else who likes red. Thanks!
The top cover would be my choice as a reader- the background photo is sharp and is enticing. I love the shadowing. I like the font much more so than the bottom. This is just my humble opinion as a reader and lover of books!
Rachael, thanks so much for taking time out of your schedule to read and comment. I love getting your opinion!
Ditto what Rachael said.
I prefer the bottom one. It’s easier to read everything (of course, I’m blind as a bat).
Thanks, Alice. For someone ‘blind as bat,’ you certainly write some fantastic stories!
Thanks, Brenda. I think you’d do better with the “suspense/thriller” thing, although I suppose you can add “romance” too if you want to. Ain’t I kind? 🙂
The top lettering says ‘romance’; the bottom says ‘suspense/thriller’.
Hmmm, since it’s a little of both, maybe she can combine the two.
I am liking the second. For technical reasons. The word “on” disappears on the top example, and without looking closely it looks like a huge moon behind the house.
The second appears foggy and mysterious behind the house …much more intriguing.
The word ‘on’ does disappear, Judy. Thanks for pointing that out.
I like the top pic better
Hi Chelle! Thanks for stopping by. I’m liking the top too, but I’m thinking of asking for the title to be outlined a little better since several pointed out some problems with the current colors.
At first glance, I didn’t see the subtle differences with the exception of the font for Serpent Lake. But when scrutinizing it more closely I saw the differences. My answer would have to be it depends. If book has more to do with a love line, I would pick the top one. If it has to so with vampires or anything Gothic or sinister, I would chose the bottom. The bottom font reminds me of the latter, if that is the kind of reader you are looking for. I think the younger set would prefer the bottom.
Thanks, Sue. I appreciate the comment – it helps.